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Post by May13 on Aug 1, 2007 10:58:37 GMT
Note:Samantha is just the name of my real friend.She aint dead,but for the story i have suprises for ya'll.
Nina:Samantha,what would you like to be? Samantha:A real pokemon. A jirachi asked her wish one time then the next day... Sign:Missing:Samantha Nina:Wait!I found a dead Torchic here! The police soon knew it was ran over by a car. Nina:Wait.Didnt Samantha say she'll become a torchic? Nina figured that it was her dear friend,all bloody and dead. Nina always remembered her and then started that she'll make a promise."Whatever i do,its for her sake."
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chizo
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Post by chizo on Aug 1, 2007 11:05:40 GMT
I see twists in a good way
Very good story
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Post by May13 on Aug 1, 2007 11:08:38 GMT
Thank you.Nice story for you too.
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jcm96
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Post by jcm96 on Sept 22, 2007 8:05:20 GMT
i like the story here is mine : note:taylor is gone and i miss her...and this was when i was 8.
james:hey taylor i found this stone and i think its a wish stone. taylor: arn't stones that pretty from wish cave? james:yeah they are. Lets go to the wish cave and make a wish. taylor: ok. i want to wish to be a ho-oh!
when they arrive at wish cave... taylor: look! its a jirachi! james swivels around. james: wow!! i want to make a wish ! taylor: NNNOOO!! its MY wish . i wish to be a ho-oh !
jirachi: i wil grant your wish, but your friend will be sad and it will be like you being killed. taylor: so! i WANT to be a ho-oh jirachi : are you sure? taylor: YYYEEESSS!!
light flashes everywhere! james: TAYLOR!!! taylor... ho-oh(taylor): see ya !! james:why... why did you do that taylor!!!
james walks the body of taylor to her house and her mum is crying and james told the story at the funeral 4 weeks later..
THE END
i hope you like it and again taylor did die she drowned at the beach
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